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Reading online is different than reading a traditional book, magazine, or newspaper. Instead of sitting down with a nice cup of coffee and zero distractions, you're bombarded with cat GIFs, ads for the shoes you never bought (thanks Google), and links to the 20 Best Pizzas You Won't Believe Exist (you'll puke after reading #7!).
An eyetracking study by the Neilson Norman Group showed that,
"users often read Web pages in an F-shaped pattern: two horizontal stripes followed by a vertical stripe."
Why does that matter? Because you'll need to write differently to get your point across to users online.
You can't edit copy you don't have. Start writing the ugly first draft. Don't paralyze yourself by thinking your first draft has to be perfect. It doesn't. Just put all your words down on paper. In your writing process you should have a time to get all your words on paper - don't worry about the title, don't worry about the opening paragraph, don't worry about how many times you've used the word "don't."
In the Content Matters Podcast Episode 22: How To Edit Copy, Barry Feldman outlines a 9-step writing & editing process:
When you're at the "re-read and make edits stage," make your words count by removing words and phrases that don't add value.
Ann Handley calls this part, "editing by chainsaw" in her book Everybody Writes: Your Guide To Creating Ridiculously Good Content (if you don't own this book, go buy it. right now). And that's what you're doing. Look for big chunks you can saw off or cut out, don't worry about the smaller details just yet.
Now that you've made the big cuts, keep an eye out for words or phrases that aren't adding value. Once you know what they are they will be easy to spot and cut out.
Feel free to make the "cut it out motion" as you edit, it's fun and editing is fun. #winwin
Remove words used as filler - many of them end in "-ly". A lot them are adverbs. The Web doesn't like adverbs - neither does one of our favorite editing tools, the Hemingway App.
Examples of extra words: actually, easily, quickly, VERY, totally, really...
Filler phrases can be replaced with the infinitive (the to form) of the verb. Or rewrite the sentence without the extra phrase. Many phrases are used unnecessarily at the beginning of a sentence. If you want to, in order to, you can, you will need to...
Before: You will need to change your password every three months or it will quickly expire.
After: Change your password every three months or it will expire.
Before: It's actually very easy to get a million retweets. Ask Carter about his strategy to get a year's supply of Wendy's chicken nuggets.
After: It's easy to get a million retweets. Ask Carter about his strategy to get a year's supply of Wendy's chicken nuggets.
The Yahoo! Style Guide has a list seven pages long of superfluous phrases and what you can use to replace them. Key point here is to replace with more direct words or phrases when it makes sense, as long as it doesn't add confusion. Here are a few examples:
| Instead of | Use |
| a few of the | a few |
| final result | result |
| advance planning | planning |
| in order to | to |
Before: In order to find a good conference to attend in your industry, you should research a few of the most popular ones and identify possible learning objectives.
After: To find a conference to attend in your industry, research a few and identify possible learning objectives.
Replace jargon with a simpler word or phrase. What is jargon? If it's an industry term that's not in the dictionary, it's probably jargon. Or if you're using it differently than the main definition. Acronyms are also a form of jargon - always spell them out.
Before: Disavowing spammy backlinks is part of a comprehensive SEO strategy.
After: Removing spammy links to your website is part of a comprehensive search engine optimization (SEO) strategy.
When using the passive voice the subject is acted upon by something. Not sure if it's passive voice? Try this trick by Rebecca Johnson (it involves zombies). While using passive voice isn't wrong, it can make sentences longer and harder to understand. Using an active voice (where the subject performs the action) sounds more engaging.
Before: The blog was written by Anna.
After: Anna wrote the blog.
This is my personal pet peeve. What "things" do you mean? Be specific - there is a better word to use. Use it.
Before: We'll share five things you can do to improve your writing.
After: We'll share five tips to improve your writing.
These tips should get you started, but you can learn more from experts like Barry Feldman on copy editing tips to improve your writing. Or Ann Handley's book, Everybody Writes: Your Go-To Guide to Creating Ridiculously Good Content.Or Copyblogger.
Use your own judgement and keep words or phrases to emphasize a point, to maintain a certain voice, or to help optimize your site for search. Also keep in mind for non-native English speaking audiences that some smaller words can help clarify parts of the language, such as keeping the word then in the if-then construction. So don't just cut words and phrases willy nilly.
By following a process, editing in big to small chunks, and being ruthless with the delete button your content will be more web-friendly and your readers will thank you.
If you need help with your content, get in touch.
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